I first wrote this poem in late 2002, after visiting the Olumirin Waterfalls in Erin-Ijesa, Osun State, SW Nigeria. The poem was inspired by the waterfalls. It later appeared in my collection of poetry, Listen to the geckos singing from a balcony (published 2003/4).
There are said to be seven layers of cascading water. Apparently not very many people successfully climb all the way to the top. (I haven’t managed to).
There’s also supposed to be a story, about some irreverant white visitor who paid with his life. For the life of me I can’t recall what he was supposed to have done.
I visited the waterfalls for the second time ever, yesterday, Sunday January 6, 2013. See my account of that most recent trip here
This second visit inspired me to revisit the poem. First I dug it out, then I gave it a minor revising.
Here we go:
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WATERFALLS
By Tolu Ogunlesi
There are seven waterfalls
or maybe five
we must climb
past in a lifetime
no one really knows
how many
we are scared of sharing
the fate they said befell
the whiteman who now lies
like a blot between pages
of moss in the slab just
above our heads
so while our feet
are busy in the waters
paintbrushes in a toddler’s grip
hands kissing away
at the cliff’s face
minds stay counting
maybe up to four
or five, many not even that far
wondering if we have passed
the point they said not to pass
then the drowning
gasping splashing dread
and we begin
a hurried descent
past fragile branches
of harried bones, feet sinking
into ancient undergrowth
of whitened hair
and we drop into the depths
of the pool we set out from
fingers empty ‘cos we need
both hands to break
a series of six-
foot falls.
(c) tolu ogunlesi 2002
Someone else that I know writes poetry like this is Somi Ekhasomhi. She knows how to captivate with simple words.
I have been there and it was in the 90s. I was scared to climb the mountain but made it to the top. There was a guide there although I went with friends. The waterfalls are amazing.
Hi Tolu, met you once when you came to our office in Oregun, Ikeja (NN24TV). Can I send you a poem to critique – just one please? One more thing, can I lay my corporate comms problems before you?